Hello Daniel,I love how you told me that you were giving 100 dollars to the refugees, because it tells me that you are thoughtful and generous.I also love how you set out your,so well done.Next time could recheck your work and make sure it makes sense.E.g instead of what would you give it,you could put why would you give it.
Hi Daniel I like how you set up your work,and how you thought about.I like how you have all of your capital letters in the right place but next time you could re-read and make sure it makes sense.
Hey Daniel,I like that you are doing the 40 hour famine.It is amazing to see that someone is generous and will donate for charity and for refugees.Next time maybe you could explain more about what is happening in Syria.
this is a really good poster about the 40 hour famine.
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DeleteHello Daniel,I love how you told me that you were giving 100 dollars to the refugees, because it tells me that you are thoughtful and generous.I also love how you set out your,so well done.Next time could recheck your work and make sure it makes sense.E.g instead of what would you give it,you could put why would you give it.
ReplyDeleteHi Daniel I like how you set up your work,and how you thought about.I like how you have all of your capital letters in the right place but next time you could re-read and make sure it makes sense.
ReplyDeleteHey Daniel,I like that you are doing the 40 hour famine.It is amazing to see that someone is generous and will donate for charity and for refugees.Next time maybe you could explain more about what is happening in Syria.
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