A Holiday In A Shoes Eyes
Here I am yet again in the dark shoe box where all the other nasty smelly shoes live. I decided to make and escape from all these other smelly shoes, I could go live in my own shoe box which would overlook the seaside and I could sit and watch the waves crash into the sand. But there was one problem, I cant move. The only way I can move is if those petty humans put me on. But that won't happen my owner has left me down here for weeks maybe months.
Them the unbelievable happened my owner had lost his new shoes, I knew I was finally going to get warn. He opened the box and he looked right at me. He pick me up but he couldn’t find my other pair. He tried to find it but he couldn’t, suddenly he yelled out “Mum can you please help me find my shoe” my ears were ringing, he said it so loud that I thought that I would never be able to hear anymore. Boom! Boom! Boom! suddenly in the distance I say a lady come over and look for my other pair. She had found it, “did you use you man eyes?” she said to my owner “I might have” he replied with quietly .
He carried me over to the couch and put me on. I felt like a new pair of shoes straight out of the store, but I knew I wasn’t. He walked out side, just then I realized that we were leaving the house and that a girl was walking with us, I think it’s my owner’s sister?, it feels like I’ve been walking for hours but I know that we have been walking for about 5 minutes. We were walking on the road when suddenly the terrain turns into long wet grass, I still don't know where we are going. Just in the distance I could see someone walking straight towards us, it looked like he was wearing skies. “ Hey Dude” my owner yelled that means he must know him “Hi” my owner's friend yelled “ Are you ready for the sleepover?’’ My owner asked “yep I sure am’’ he replied with. To me, this is going to be a problem because he will leave me in the shoe box and forget about me again and he did.
Man it’s been over a week now and I’m still stuck in this smelly box, all of a sudden I heard foot steps. They got closer and closer and closer until they stopped. My owner had opened the box and lifted me out, he carried me and then threw me at the couch, it hurt but I was fine. He put me on, finally I’m out. I looked at the clock that was on the wall next to me. It was 6 o’clock in the morning. I wonder where we are going at this time. 5 minutes later my owner’s family all loaded into a van. I still don’t know where we are going. 3 and a half hours later we arrived at where we were going. My owner stepped outside and walked towards a house. Everyone was quiet, In the the house I heard a voice say “Leigh can you please go shut the door” then I heard foot steps. All of a sudden a hand reach out to pull back a door in front of us. My owner’s dad yelled “WHAT ARE YOU DOING” and scared the boy who went to shut the door. We all walked inside and dumped all our stuff. “Mum” my owner said “I need new shoes” he yelled “ok just chuck your shoes in the fire and I’ll get you new shoes tomorrow” she said back “ok” my owner replied with.
Wait what you're going to put me into the fire, oh gosh well I guess this is the end of me. Good by cruel world. All of a sudden I stopped and my owner put me on the floor, I’m safe YAY.
To Be Continued
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This week in our class we have been learning about and how to write a recount. Our recount has to have a title, orientation (who, what, when, where and why), Middle (Events in order) and a conclusion which describes that it is an ending.After all I had a great holiday.